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Recently I have had a debate about whether money can bring us happiness. The students have different opinions.
Some students think that money is so important that we couldn’t survive without money. Besides, money can help us to solve many problems in life. In addition, it is money that allows us to live a comfortable life.
Others, however, have opposite opinion. They think money doesn’t mean everything. For example, money cannot buy happiness or health. If we attach too much importance to money, we cannot find the real meaning of life, and nor can we find pleasure in life.
Personally, we should not regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that helps us to get what we need. We should use it wisely and properly. Only in this way can we enjoy life to the fullest.
试题分析：本篇书面表达为正反方议论文。讨论金钱是否能带来幸福”这一话题，正方和反方的观点都已经给出，谈我们应如何正确看待金钱，正反方议论文结构典型，要记住基本结构，另外多记忆一些模板句。写作时可以套用一些固定格式，文章结构为：?引入句→②正方观点阐述→?反方观点阐述，还有自己的观点，论述两种不同观点主要是结合要点写，自己的看法没有要点要学生自己发挥。要求学生有很好的英语思维能力。但里面的内容句式要富于变化，要注意遣词造句，层次清晰，语句连贯。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如help sb. do，allow sb to do，live a … life，for example, attach … to …，in this way；还运用句型nor引导的部分倒装句，only放句首引导的倒装结构等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：besides, in addition, however, for example, personally等等。
